3 comments on “NaPoWriMo 2013 – Day 11 – Untitled Tanka.

  1. Pingback: NaPoWriMo (# 12): Memories | Thinking aloud….

  2. Yup, I like how you did this. And you were right about the six syllables. I do like breaking the rules for effect, but I’m not sure the example poem has a stellar last line worthy of the rule break. No offense to whomever wrote it. 🙂

    Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s